tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2501018540996014141.post8125007667903403831..comments2023-03-27T01:00:01.935-07:00Comments on 99 Monkeys: King Street Station (Flash Fiction)Deborah Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13437812947833118376noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2501018540996014141.post-68739824431036018762015-09-13T11:20:42.980-07:002015-09-13T11:20:42.980-07:00Ahh the attempt to find oneself by simply changing...Ahh the attempt to find oneself by simply changing location, as if the self were truly defined by place and not carried within. Loved the evocation of the city: "Traffic choreographs itself. Buses fart, horns blare, an argument approaches and fades as a couple walks by. Over the parapet, in the tunnels, a train clangs as it shuffles up to the platform." Just great.Jeanne Belisle Lombardohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02385695694971956572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2501018540996014141.post-26470352337076198052015-09-12T22:45:44.187-07:002015-09-12T22:45:44.187-07:00You've done this well getting the unhappiness ...You've done this well getting the unhappiness that she has found in the city. It hadn't lived up to expectations as I've found are often the case with expectations. Great decision she made to not be lost in the city but rather go back and refinding herself.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652282229264394887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2501018540996014141.post-68987114657054062902015-09-11T06:00:40.336-07:002015-09-11T06:00:40.336-07:00Thank you for a great prompt, and for stopping by!...Thank you for a great prompt, and for stopping by!Deborah Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437812947833118376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2501018540996014141.post-52809801098877208612015-09-10T14:10:25.367-07:002015-09-10T14:10:25.367-07:00Ah, there's such a feel of discontent in that ...Ah, there's such a feel of discontent in that opening line. The cityscape swallows her up until she makes that choice. Great use of the prompt!CharliMillshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16058535220423384676noreply@blogger.com